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Fuel the anger
Feed the fire
You're now a stranger
A traitor, a liar
You made me believe
Your lies were true
Now you should leave
I'm through with you
Memories of the past
Remain locked away
Our friendship wouldn't last
When you acted that way
You acted wrong
Attacking a friend
Who you've known for so long
Now across the line you stand
Take my advice
Feed the fire
Then run like mice
You traitorous liar!
Feed the fire
You're now a stranger
A traitor, a liar
You made me believe
Your lies were true
Now you should leave
I'm through with you
Memories of the past
Remain locked away
Our friendship wouldn't last
When you acted that way
You acted wrong
Attacking a friend
Who you've known for so long
Now across the line you stand
Take my advice
Feed the fire
Then run like mice
You traitorous liar!
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I wrote this two months ago when a couple of my friends turned on another friend. The poem is about betrayal and anger.
*Note: the title was supposed to be Feed the Fire (Traitor) but sadly you can't have parenthesis in titles
oh well.... 
*Note: the title was supposed to be Feed the Fire (Traitor) but sadly you can't have parenthesis in titles
oh well.... © 2010 - 2024 GoddessSpiritwolf
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Wow, you bring this feeling of anger across really well with your words. I really don't wanna be that other person 
And yes, that ban on parenthesis in titles is really annoying
And yes, that ban on parenthesis in titles is really annoying