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Fuel the anger
Feed the fire
You're now a stranger
A traitor, a liar

You made me believe
Your lies were true
Now you should leave
I'm through with you

Memories of the past
Remain locked away
Our friendship wouldn't last
When you acted that way

You acted wrong
Attacking a friend
Who you've known for so long
Now across the line you stand

Take my advice
Feed the fire
Then run like mice
You traitorous liar!
I wrote this two months ago when a couple of my friends turned on another friend. The poem is about betrayal and anger.

*Note: the title was supposed to be Feed the Fire (Traitor) but sadly you can't have parenthesis in titles =( oh well.... ^^;
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LostInRemembrance Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2010
Wow, you bring this feeling of anger across really well with your words. I really don't wanna be that other person ;)

And yes, that ban on parenthesis in titles is really annoying
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GoddessSpiritwolf Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
lol, thank you! and why did the ban parenthesis anyway? ^_^
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LostInRemembrance Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2010
I have no idea. Doesn't make any sense to me. Also I think the character limit is a little too restrictive
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GoddessSpiritwolf Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah, defiantly on signatures. i had to cut out a few characters so my sig would fit. It's just odd, you could say. eh, oh well. least there is some good things that make up for the bad stuff.
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LostInRemembrance Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2010
that's true :)
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