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I am sorry
For trying to be strong
I am sorry
For letting this go so long

I am sorry
For hurting you
I am sorry
But you hurt me too

I am sorry
For not being there
I am sorry
That you don't care

I am sorry
For all your stress
I am sorry
For this whole mess

I am sorry
For the tears I've shed
I am sorry
For the cruel words you've said

I am sorry
That you are pissed
I am sorry
That I won't be missed

I am sorry
That you hate me so
I am sorry
That I can't let this go

I am sorry
That you feel this way
I am sorry
For all the words I want to say

I am sorry
For your choice
I am sorry
You never want to hear my voice

I am sorry
For this betrayel
I am sorry
That our friendship has sailed

I am sorry
For being sorry
I am sorry
So, so, sorry
Yet another 4 year old poem i wrote. I had a really bad fight with a friend of mine and she pushed me away farther, even saying hurtful words towards me. After awhile the whole thing blew over and we were friends again. Years passed and we are closier than ever. ^_^

Attention: there is one cuss word "pissed" and i wasn't sure if this poem needed a "warning" or not....I dont' want to get into trouble with dA over one word, ^^;
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LostInRemembrance Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010
"That our friendship has sailed"

That line is awesome! You'd expect the word at the end to be "failed" but the fact that it's another word makes it great. Good work :)

And I don't think you'll get into trouble for saying "pissed" without a warning. I've seen people pull off "worse" around here ;)
And to be honest, if someone gets upset over that word, which fits perfectly well into the context of the poem, they might be a little too sensitive. And after all, if art were to always follow every rule that someone makes up, we wouldn't have most great works of art ;)
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GoddessSpiritwolf Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
lol, i never thought of "failed", but "sailed" gives it a more metaphoric meaning and it rolls of the tongue. ^_^

lol, well i'd like to be safe than being yelled at. but i agree it would be bad if i got lectured for that minor cuss word. So true indeed, art obeys no laws! ^_^
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LostInRemembrance Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2010
Well, I somehow expected "failed", but I always like it when my expectations are "shattered" in a good way (I can't really think of a better word now...) like that. And sailed really gives you a great image.

I really don't think they're gonna say anything. I guess if it's artistic or good enough (or if they just don't see it ;) ) they don't do anything
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GoddessSpiritwolf Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
lol, i was also playing on the "ship" part of friendship. that's where i got "Sailed" from. It's like it's like i'm watching it go away from me... ^_^

true, and i have a couple of minor cuss words in my Lycanthrope Legacy Story. And that's been on about awhile now, so i think i'm safe with those minor words ;) lol ^_^
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LostInRemembrance Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2010
That's pretty cool. I didn't catch that, but it's a great metaphor

I even had a pretty big violation (or should I say deviation? Yeah, I know, bad pun ;) ) on my other account and no one caught it. I guess either no one saw it or it was photoshopped and/or artistic enough so that it was ok, I really don't know ;)
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GoddessSpiritwolf Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
lol! Knock on wood you didn't get caught! that's like wehn i had my ipod and cell phone case strapped to my jeans' waste all through high school and no one said a thing to me. lol
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LostInRemembrance Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2010
Maybe no one notices it because it's so obvious. No one expects you to do that, so no one notices. Or it's just dumb luck. :D
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GoddessSpiritwolf Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
lol, it's harder to see something in plain site. dumb luck is still luck. ;) ^_^
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